Punctuating Dialogue
The rules for punctuating dialogue can be tricky. This is because you have to take into account two layers of punctuation:
The internal punctuation of whatever the person is saying.
The punctuation of the sentence around the dialogue that tells you who’s speaking and how—also called a dialogue tag.
Here are some tips to help you remember what punctuation to use when in dialogue.
Use a comma . . .
after the dialogue tag but before the dialogue.
ex: She said, “That was cool.”
after the dialogue but before the dialogue tag.
ex: “That was cool,” she said.
when breaking up a complete sentence with a dialogue tag.
Place one comma at the end of the first part of dialogue and one after the tag.
ex: “That’s so cool,” she said, “because he’s so fast.”
ex: “Alex,” they said, “how are you?”
Do NOT use a comma . . .
when there’s a question mark or exclamation point before the dialogue tag.
ex: “Where are you?” they asked.
ex: “I know where you are!” she shouted.
when the following sentences is not a dialogue tag.
ex: “You’re so funny.” She giggled.
ex: “I know where you are.” He walked toward Billy’s hiding spot.
when the dialogue tag is between two full sentences of dialogue.
ex: "You're so funny," they said. "I can't believe you're an accountant."
ex: "I know," he said. "I'm the best."
I hope that helps clear up any confusion about when to use commas in dialogue. Save this post for future reference!